Well, well, well.

November 20th, 2008

A new study (funded by Facebook, lol):

http://www.nytimes.com/2008/11/20/us/20internet.html?hp

The findings mirror almost exactly some I wrote up for an ethnographic market research firm over the summer—especially around public identity, dating and distance.

On another note, my 64 year old Scottish mother wrote “OMG” in an email the other day.

For Crying Out Loud

November 13th, 2008

With one wrong stroke of the keyboard I have just put my entire blog in italics.

Also, the reason I’ve not posted recently is because I am fielding tons of long and very serious-business comments of a nature I don’t want to name in case doing so attracts more of the same. To delete them from my mailbox and comments page I have to at least momentarily confront them and it’s pretty unpleasant, and it leaves me with little stomach for posting.

Which raises some questions for me about employing a blog in the classroom as I propose to, in my syllabus. I think I would have to make them password protected—maybe make everyone’s protected, but with the same password for everyone, so the whole class could see each other’s?

Syllabus Draft

November 13th, 2008

English 1000:
This is the Story

Instructor: Melanie Fallon Contact & Appointments:
Office: 1 Tate Hall melanie.fallon@hotmail.com
Hours: Tues/Thurs: 12:30-2:00 646.267.0640

Course Description:
The goal of English 1000 is to introduce students to the practice of academic writing in preparation for MU’s required Writing Intensive courses. “Writing” in this digital age can mean many things, however—blogging, email, social networking sites, comment spaces on websites and PowerPoint presentations all invite us to write, just as traditional essays do. In this class we will explore a number of different fields in which we play as writers, and ask how our writing changes as we move from one to the other, and what kinds of writing and thinking various formats and audiences invite from us.

Required Materials:
There are no books to buy. Instead, I will provide handouts of written texts as needed. There is also one film on the syllabus, This Is England (dir. Shane Meadows, 2006), which is available for rent at Ninth Street Video or from Netflix, or on loan from me. This class will take place in a computer lab, but you will also need easy access to a computer for homework assignments throughout the semester.

Required Activities:
10 blog posts
Wiki page: 150-200 wordsm with links
Flickr Project: 8 images plus notation, titled “This is America”
One 3-5 minute iMovie
One 4-6 page paper

Attendance Policies:
Despite what the catalog says, English 1000 is not a lecture class, but a cross between a seminar and a writing studio—and its success depends upon the thoughtful participation of everyone in the group. Please show respect for your peers, then, and for your own work, by showing up for class in both body and spirit—which means being on time. You are allowed 4 absences between now and the semester’s end, including absences for illness. For every class you miss after that, I will deduct a full letter grade from your overall grade for the course, however, and two instances of lateness exceeding 10 minutes will be considered equal to one absence. If you have six or more absences before [DATE], I will drop you from the course—but after that date, dropping without a grade is no longer an option. Finally, if a genuine emergency which will mean extended absences, please contact me as soon as possible.

Plagiarism:
Plagiarism will not be tolerated. You must properly cite the sources for all ideas and language not your own. You should examine a style manual, such as the latest edition of the MLA Handbook, or of Diana Hacker’s A Pocket Guide to Style, or else visit the Purdue Online Writing Lab— http://owl.english.purdue.edu—for citation guidelines (as well as good overall advice on writing). Be especially careful when doing Internet research. You may NEVER use a “paper mill” as a source, and all legitimate sources must be cited. Even accidental or trivial instances of plagiarism will result in a lowered grade, while serious cases will incur a zero for the assignment and referral to the Provost’s office, which may mean suspension or expulsion.

Support Services:
Sudden immersion in the complexities of college level writing—not to mention the rest of a whole new life—can be challenging. Remember, though: you are not alone! Please make use of office hours with me, and visit the Writing Lab (882-2946). You can also contact the Counseling Center (882-6601) for help with stress management and other issues.

Accommodations:
Please inform me if you have a disability and need any kind of classroom accommodations. You should also register with Disability Services at 882-4696.

Grade Breakdown:
In-Class Participation: 100 points
Blog: 150 points (10 pts per week)
Wiki page: 100 points
Flickr: 100 points (50 pts images, 50 pts text)
i-Movie Film Proposal (posted to Wiki): 150 points
“Digital Double” Paper: 150 points

Total: 750 points

750 A +
650-749 A
500-649 B
400-499 C
300-399 D
0-299 F

Week 1:

Tuesday: Introductions, review of syllabus

No Homework.

Thursday: Icebreaker (Lying Game); set up blogs.

Homework: A blog entry (250 words) titled “A Writer’s Autobiography.” Discuss high school writing, your experience of keeping a journal, email correspondence, text messages, journalism—any or all of the ways you write.

Week 2:

Tuesday: Discussion of blog entries, different writing histories.

Homework: Visit the following blogs:

www.alexanderchee.net
www.postsecret.blogspot.com
www.freakonomics.com
http://finallyfeminism101.blogspot.com
www.bookslut.com
http://blackademics.org
http://www.gigazine.net
http://ta-nehisicoates.theatlantic.com/
http://www.dailykos.com
www.radosh,net
http://www.boingboing.net
http://thesartorialist.com
http://family.go.com/parent-to-parent/blogs/catherine-newman-blog

Choose one of the blogs, read at least four posts, and, on your blog, write a description of the one you’ve chosen. What is its purpose? How does it look? Is it image or text heavy? Complicated or simple? What thoughts does it provoke? Would you visit it again?

Thursday: In-class presentation of blog reviews/discussion of blogs.

Homework: Visit classmates’ blogs. Write a 50-100 word comment to at least 3 classmates—1 of whom chose the same blog as you, 2 of whom didn’t—responding to their analysis, how you agree or don’t, how their interpretation made you see the blog differently.

Week 3:

Tuesday: In class, discuss protocol and ethics of blogging/commenting—and the experience of being read by a wider audience.

Homework: Find a blog YOU like, not on my list, write a review of what the blog’s subject, and perspective are, and put on your blogroll.

Thursday: In class, visit each other’s chosen blogs, discuss.

Homework: Write a blog post reflecting on the styles of blogs you’ve seen, which are more accessible to readers, and why.

Week 4:

Tuesday: Watch 1st half of This is England. Discuss processes of distillation and summarizing.

Homework: Post to blog a one-line summary of film, and then a one-paragraph summary of what we’ve seen so far.

Thursday: Watch 2nd half of movie. Discuss movie.

Homework: Post to blog a one-line summary and one-paragraph summary of whole film, plus one image or detail that, in your mind, captures the essence of the film.

Week 5:

Tuesday: Watch clips from film. Discuss visual information, process of note-taking, and transforming observations into questions.

Homework: On blog, post 5 questions the film is asking.

Thursday: Library lesson: research related to questions.

Homework: Blog post: type up your library findings and sources for each.

Week 6:

Tuesday: Wiki lesson. Begin posting one-line and one-paragraph summaries of This is England, and list of five questions to the Wiki. Add links to websites, other pages; create a web of connections.

Homework: Finish This is England wiki pages.

Thursday: Presentation of Wiki pages; begin creative writing exercise (Writing Home).

Homework: Type up/finish Writing Home exercise on blog. Comment on posts by 2 people whose blog you haven’t commented on yet.

Week 7

Tuesday: Flickr lesson/discuss flickr project. Collect 1st four images in class.

Homework: Annotate first 4 images; post link to blog.

Thursday: In-class presentations (6 students). Collect and annotate final 4 images.

Homework: Write a blog post (500 words) about your flickr project.

Week 8

Tuesday: In-class presentations, 6 students. In-class blogging about class flickrs as a whole—connections and similarities as well as differences.

Homework: Read and post comments on 3 blogs you haven’t before.

Thursday: 4 presentations. Creative writing exercise about clothing. 4 more presentations.

Homework: Blog about what you remember of the year you turned 13—not so much who you were and what you felt, but what you remember of the world around you. What did the other kids at school look like? How did the adults seem? What kinds of things did they say? What were your activities? What songs were on the radio? What movies at the theatre? What did your home and school and classroom and family car, if you had one, look like?

Week 9

Tuesday: Discuss iMovie project. iMovie training.

Homework: Choose 3 songs for your iMovie. Blog about the songs, background information, why you chose them what kinds of moods you think they will inspire.

Thursday: Discussion of songs. Begin choosing video clips and still images for iMovie. Share some ideas and resources.

Homework: Make first minute of iMovie.

Week 10

Tuesday: Mini presentations. Discussion. Continue searching for clips, images.

Homework: Blog post about iMovie’s progress.

Thursday: Start putting together/editing iMovie.

Homework: Write and record voice-over for iMovie.

Week 11

Tuesday: iMovie due! 6 Presentations

Homework: Blog post—reflection on what kind of writing the iMovie demanded, how it was different from, say, a blog or a wiki, and why.

Thursday: Next 6 presentations. Discussion of ideas from blog posts.

Homework: Comment on 2 class blogs you haven’t commented on yet. Read article on “Googlegangers”: http://www.nytimes.com/2008/04/10/us/10names.html

Week 12

Tuesday: Final 7 presentations. In class, read excerpt from Freud’s and Greene’s discussions of The Uncanny, and doubles and doppelgangers as sources of dread, and compare to the Times article.

Homework: Google yourself. Create a wiki page that lists all of your Googlegangers and the information about them, with links.

Thursday: Informal presentations/discussion of Googlegangers. Exercise: finding connections.

Homework: Write a blog post about connections other than name between the digital doubles, and between you and them. Anything surprising or unsettling? What direction do they point you in for further research? Find sites and sources about your connections, and provide links to them.

Thursday: Discuss web of connections, blog posts. Writing exercise: draft the opening of a paper, “This is [YOUR NAME].”

Homework: Finish the draft of your paper.

Week 13

THANKSGIVING—FINISH DRAFT OF DIGITAL DOUBLES PAPER

Week 14

Tuesday: In-class, read

Homework: Blog about what you plan to revise in your paper.

Thursday: In class, revise paper.

Homework: Finish paper revision.

Week 15

Tuesday: “This is [YOUR NAME]” final paper due. In-class presentations.

Homework: Blog a reflection on the experience of writing a print essay versus the visual projects.

Thursday: In-class presentations.

Homework: Comment on 2 blogs you’ve not commented on before.

Week 16

Tuesday: In-class presentations.

Thursday: Evaluations, farewells.

My Alter Ego

November 3rd, 2008

Print Duddy.

Thinking about Technology

October 28th, 2008

As I think about my syllabus and assignment, and using technology in the classroom, issues to consider:

1. Different people have different relationships with/experience of technology—this is an extension of the disparities between students in terms of their history and ability with, say, theory, or writing, or education. People with flickr accounts already, for example, have a massive head start when it comes to projects revolved around flickr. People who are new to applications and processes, however, may spend double or triple the time that others do learning to use them. How does this affect content and level of reading/writing required? To what degree does one grade according to the quality of the content versus the time spent engaging with the technology?

2. Privacy issues. On the one hand, you could argue that education and the modern world demand a new organizing of public and private. Certainly, youngsters seem to have a different relationship to these ideas. On the other hand, UM policy requires instructors to provide alternatives for those who do not wish to make their writing public. For an elective, one could simply require public participation. For a mandatory course, the ethics are different. Screen names may be one answer, passwords another. How to provide alternatives without undermining group learning/experience?

It’s You, Xanadu

October 27th, 2008

I am really showing my age (and the fact that I wasn’t even cool when I was young) with these last two titles.

From Yancey: “The new, then, repeats what came before, while at the same time remaking that which it models” (314) As in Ulmer’s remake of Kublai Khan. Not a restating, Ulmer says, drawing on the history of composing, but an asking again of the original question and an answering anew in a new medium, the generation of a new delivery. Striking is the loss embedded into both Coleridge’s poem and into the Benjamin tale, by the way, the loss, the interruption, the need to start again, writing of course being a separation from a real or imagined original, ideal, a pining for the aura, which is embedded in the image, not the word. Do Internet delivery systems and visual argument allow better for representation of the loss, the gap, make visible their seams and interruptions than the traditional essay can?

Or is it simply that the form of delivery shapes the product, as Yancey says, requires a transformation, some things to be left out, others to change, and produces a different kind of involvement, a necessary engagement (involvement) with not only the content but the form and the methods of production and delivery? Is it really just that?

Now That I’m Here…

October 26th, 2008

Is it not necessary to draw a line between those who can believe we can continue to situate our present discontinuities within the historical and transcendental tradition of the nineteenth century and those who are making a great effort to liberate themselves, once and for all, from this conceptual framework? (Foucault, “What is an Author”) 

Slowly, some of the pieces are starting to come together for me. For example, the degree to which the essay, literature and composition have been historically constructed, and the degree to which they, as they have informed the (writing) classroom, derive from the past and its particulars. Also, the way they have normalized and naturalized themselves to such an extent that they have come to equal “writing,” to the exclusion of other discursive practices, methodologies and forms—in other words are themselves ideology.

Duh.

Ulmer, George, Yancey, Gilyard, Collins, and others we’ve read would fall on the latter side of Foucault’s line, if I am understanding both it and them correctly. Remake, remix, visual argument, non-linearity, networking, involvement, juxtaposition, even Sophistry, as principles not only of composition but Composition, all represent a return to those points of origin where writing was tied to type, where rhetoric was tied to philosophy, and signifier to signified (NOT that these are all the same types of moments), and creatively and intellectually deploy the gap.Nothing like being thrown into the middle of a giant row when you don’t even know what everyone’s so upset about. Which just about sums up my experience of academia so far.Novelists work in a nostalgic form, of course, poets less so. For nearly twenty years now I have not been able to look at a flock of birds in flight without hearing (seeing) Cixous, who described them as writing in the sky. In more recent years I have often thought of Arthur Tze saying that the Chinese place the character for “fire” on top of the one for “tree” to create autumn: the literal translation is “tree tips on fire.” Situational rather than nominal, perhaps.

I always saw the space around and between letters and words as wide-open space, where the imagination goes to work and meaning forms and banks and breaks apart; I always did read aloud in order to better understand whether and how writing worked; I always worried about whether to break to the next line, whether the em dash or the comma worked best on the visual as well as punctational level. And Sal and I have often wondered why the best of films still doesn’t move either one of us as the best of books do—and she’s a video maker, not even a big reader anymore. I always thought that had something to do with the pleasure of the image being deferred in words, fully realized only in the mind, that the pleasure lay somewhere in that gap and the work it demanded. Of course, people like Ulmer and Vitanza and Collins are not arguing for a move away from words, far from it, just more and different forms of invention and delivery. I do get that. I think.

Centipedal

October 22nd, 2008

My eyes feel like centipedes. So overworked by staring at screens are my eyes, by reading print-outs, reading books, reading the letters that pop up one by one as I type, and watching them reorganize when I edit, that they feel as though they have sprouted a hundred legs each, each leg now attached to some object, now detached and waving weakly in the air.Or maybe it’s my brain.

I find Collins’s weblog essay fascinating on the level of content and form, even if it has contributed to the centipede effect. On the one hand, it’s so much easier to both loosely hold the whole idea and still be aware of how the strands shoot out and loop back, connect and criss-cross, than when reading a fixed, linear printed text, easier to “know” swiftly and intuitively, very different from the methodical hunt and pick I normally do when I read theory, copying out notes by hand, thereby automatically privileging and imprinting some points and not others.

Will anything stick, though? Only time will tell. Actually, and speaking of time that’s not quite true: those elements that ring an old bell will, I reckon, such as the questions of now and time and moments. I learned from Anne Carson that ancient Greek actually had a tense–perhaps it was called deictic or epideictic, I don’t remember–to describe the precise moment when the sun was directly overhead, noon exactly, when shape and the shadow were fleetingly united. I have used this shallow knowledge in the past to discuss the short-short as a form in fiction. Of course, there is no such tense in English. When I brought this up with respect to Derrida in a class, I was reminded that he would say ’tis impossible, the signifier and the signified, shadow and thing, can never occupy the same space. What the old Greek tense, and this essay seems to say, however, that the fleetingness, the temporality can be built in, referred to, approximated if not represented. So is deictic temporal as well as spacial?

This has interesting possibilities for my periodic work on literary impressionism in Deborah Eisenberg.I love the idea that with all these discussion of the modern we are always returning to the ancient, and from MacLuhan via Heston, from technology to the body…

These are just silly many-legged notes and here are some more:

1. Class blogs as centripetal vs. centrifugal. Which is the case with these blogs, the ones for Pedagogy? They are centrifugal, or mine has been at least, in so far as they spin off texts and discussions that are other parts of the class, and we use them to connect to other aspects of experience and learning. They are centripetal to the degree that we use them to pull out points from the authoritative texts, stick close to the centre, and to the degree that there is an RSS feed directly to an instructor who can respond negatively or positively within moments. Centripetal to the degree that I feel as though I am not following the instructions on the syllabus whenever I am most engaged with writing and the blog.

2. My own Comp course and teaching style are deeply centripetal. I started them off in small groups discussing clips from This is England, but they were so quiet, so low-energy today, that when I asked them if they would be more comfortable in a big group discussion that they all shouted yes, so I reorganized them again around my authoritative identity, and let them just make comments to me, get my response, answer my questions. What a cop-out. But cannot even the most apparently centripetal student experience be centrifugal in the long run, insofar as it is networked to the rest of their lives and learning, as Collins says our own teaching experience is? And here if I knew more about physics or had more confidence I could talk about the universe’s expansion, and questions of time and speed. Perhaps Collins himself says this; to know I’d have to click back and click around. That’s a challenge, too, trying to write and read on the same small physical screen. Trying to slip out from under the sun, or is it the shadow, long enough to speak.

3. I think I might try a course blog next semester. Just see if it makes things a little easier, gives them some space of their own, one that isn’t a windowless cinderbock cell overpopulated by me.

Review: Literacy, Technology and Society (Prentice Hall) (Final)

October 20th, 2008

Literacy, Technology and Society: Confronting the Issues (eds. Gail E. Hawisher and Cynthia E. Selfe) is a 1997 textbook that aims to engage with technology as both object and method of study, framing information technology—specifically, computers and the Internet—in social, political, historical and critical terms. Its project, and the need to imagine using this book in a composition classroom, have prompted me to re-imagine, perhaps for the first time, a way for learning to take place—even as the book’s out-of-datedness in terms of not only content but style (I can’t believe I just said that, me the fuddy of all print-duddies), unfortunately ruled it out as a primary text I would choose for that experiment in teaching. I hate to begin a review on so evaluative a note, but I honestly feel that in this case it’s warranted; the rapid and minute evolutions of technology have, of course, resulted in a whole new landscape into which this text only awkwardly fits, and I will say more on this later.

First, though, on to what Literacy, Technology and Society does offer. The book is divided into five sections: “Social Issues and Technology;” “Education and Technology;” “Ethics, Law and Technology;” “Gender and Technology;” and “Government and Technology.” Each section contains a mix of scholarly essays, articles aimed at a broader audience, visual representations of technology, and fiction. There are also four appendices: a guide to how to “look” and analyze visual text; guides to citing electronic text in the APA and MLA styles; and a copy of the Bill of Rights, which is intended for students to use as they consider the various ethics, legal implications and possibilities at play and at stake in the Information Age—which a number of the essays and exercises will ask them to do.

What interests me most about this book is its explicitly ideological position that one does, should and must confront “issues” when using technology and its interest in drawing students’ attention to those issues—and as I mentioned earlier, this led me to think about working with technology differently than I have so far, and to a new conception of teaching, in which I (as teacher and fuddy-duddy) might be able to help students gain some critical distance (”academicize,” as Stanley Fish would say) technology even as they train me in it, or rather in their immersion-experience of it. After all, this is the sea they swim in, at least at MU, from what I can tell of my students so far; whether they have ever taken a step back and analyzed that experience or even tried to make it visible, is another question, one this book could help to explore. So if they work within and produce New Media, what I can do is help them to look at it critically, revise the product, just like I do with papers. (Oh. Will I forever be struck by the blindingly obvious?) Meanwhile, they would be able to bring to bear their own unique experience, authority and identity around technology; it would all become more of an exchange of perspectives than I have yet been able to achieve around, say, literature or film or political writing of my own choosing, and about which I inevitably feel more prepared to speak than they do.

Even the age and creakiness of the book may be of some value. Reading documents produced prior to and assembled at the brink of the information and technology explosion—several of the materials produced, in fact, in the 80s, and some of the fiction even earlier—could provide fodder for discussion of and writing about how the information landscape and aesthetic have changed in the years that these students have spent growing up. Also, those articles which examine, for example, the kinds of lifesaving communities that the Internet offers gay teens, and problems of Internet stalking, could provide the basis for wider research and discussion, a kind of bringing up-to-date of the discourse.

As with Reading City Life, and as the previous paragraph implies, I see some meta-value and meta-possibilities for this text. Its sheer size and look—601 pages, mostly of dense, black and white text—offer an aesthetic experience so at odds with the aesthetic experience of the world it is discussing that I imagine that contrast itself constituting the course’s central exigence. Students could discuss what a book which aims to provoke critical thought about the Internet in 2008/9 should look like, or whether such a critique should be in a book form at all, and over the course of the semester work to create an alternative version. This could involve excerpting from the book, reorganizing, and writing their own contributions. They could contrast the science fiction with more contemporary fiction, including, say, fan fiction on the Internet.

As for the collected materials, and their framing, taken together (and in some cases individually) they do operate according to the social-epistemic model, asking students to consider technology from a number of vantage points, and its impact upon different areas of social, economic and imaginative life (the imaginative being represented by the science fiction and articles on cyborgs and so on). Its left-leaning, progressive ideology is fore-fronted in mini-introductions to each text: one, with regard to an academic journal article on “the specific problems women and other underrepresented groups on campus encounter online” (348), invites readers to “think about electronic groups in relation to sexism and to decide what, if any, actions need to be taken on your own campus” as they read (348). The writing exercises that follow involve contacting women’s groups on campuses and intervewing representatives, making lists of ways that online communities “discriminate against men,” and developing workable plans for combating online discrimination that are to be sent to appropriate faculty, staff and students. “Writing and Learning,” as Hawisher and Selfe title the exercise sections following the articles, are therefore deeply connected to taking action in a real world context in this book—again, consistent with the social epistemic model of pedagogy. There are also multiple extended writing exercises that involve online research, identification of relevant URLs, and so on, but most of these introductions to the actual use of technology seem buried in the text-dense, traditional writing-focused context. A teacher would probably do well not to rely on this text as a prompt for the hands-on work, but to use it instead as part of a broader and more applied syllabus, in which it could serve to generate wider historical and ethical discussions around that work.

Every Second Counts

October 20th, 2008

I’ve been thinking about what I said about academia/deconstruction appealing to people because you get to sit around and invent quirky titles. By people, I meant of course me.

That fancy of mine comes straight from my mother’s father, whom we called Papa, pronounced to rhyme with Napa. Mum’s mother was Nana, and it was all very pretentious for Glasgow, part of Mum’s mythology that we were French on her side rather than pure lace-curtain Irish, eaters of red lentils and sadly not black ones. In any case, Papa used to enter all the contests for jingles and slogans on the radio and in the paper. Once, he was even on a television game show called Every Second Counts and got stage fright—though with a show name like that, can you blame him?

He stood there frozen while the clock ticked and the other contestants banged on their bells and gobbled up the points, and he said not one word. He failed to answer a single question. The only prize he came away with was the one you got just for showing up, a crystal decanter engraved with the name of the show, and four matching glasses. He gave the set to my mother, and we had it for a couple of years in our rented house in Farnham, until I threw a party when my parents were out of town and one of my teenage wastrel friends stole it.

What a shame. It would be great to be able to pour myself a drink in the evening from a decanter that said Every Second Counts. The point of all this being that I’ve inherited from Papa, whose name was Joe Houston, my nerves around deadlines and my temporal anxiety in general, that sense of time draining away, and me only wanting to turn my face from it, every wee ending a reminder of the big yin tae come—and didnae Papa’s, and mah Nana’s tae, come awfy, awfy soon?